Looks good. A redneck seems like a good fit for the Miller, but I agree with Reesha in that perhaps you should address your setting a bit more. Also, maybe you should address the Miller's overall function in the tale. Overall it does work well though, and the example is a fairly good portrayal, although you might want to cut out a bit of it. Also, this draft is technically supposed to be four minutes, but whatever.
Looks good.
ReplyDeleteA redneck seems like a good fit for the Miller, but I agree with Reesha in that perhaps you should address your setting a bit more. Also, maybe you should address the Miller's overall function in the tale. Overall it does work well though, and the example is a fairly good portrayal, although you might want to cut out a bit of it.
Also, this draft is technically supposed to be four minutes, but whatever.