Sunday, March 7, 2010

Multimodal Donne Annotation: Stage 3

This rough draft doesn't have any of the pictures in it that I plan to have in the final draft. I am also thinking about putting music to it also.


2 comments:

  1. I like your idea for your Donne Annotation, but I noticed that you don't have a works cited slide yet. You have your 5 annotations, but which sources did they come from? I can tell that your annotations all have a purpose, and that each one is summarized in a very understandable way for the audience! (Which is always a good thing!) Your annotations are also very organized, and I think overall you have a good start for your final draft (and you may still want to post a works cited page so that we can see where your annotations are coming from).

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  2. I like your presentation of your annotations, but part of the screen in cut off when I view it. Your annotations are great, but like Lidnsey said, I would include your sources and add a work cited page. It helps to cite your sources so it is easier to differentaite between what your ideas are and how they compare to scholar's interpretation.

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